Thursday 28 October 2010
Institutional credits
Going back looking at film trailers I realised a lot of them had these at the end of their trailers, I haven't considered adding one to mine until now, I feel I should include one as it gives credit to the people who helped make it but also will make the trailer look more professional.
Below is two examples they include the various production, broadcasting companies, and people who contributed to the music. But also includes the actors in the films. Some also include the logos. I also have included my design at the bottom
Below is two examples they include the various production, broadcasting companies, and people who contributed to the music. But also includes the actors in the films. Some also include the logos. I also have included my design at the bottom
Tuesday 12 October 2010
Tuesday 5 October 2010
Change of plans
I decided to change the opening scene to make it more interesting, this involved having to re-storyboard my ideas and editing the script but overall the new improvement is shorter and gets straight to the point expressing the hate the families have for eachother this is represented visually but with captions too.
New script
Romeo Vs Juliet script
Scene 1
(Simple longshot of two houses in split screen, possibly with a blue and pink tint to distinguish between the two)
(fades)
Caption appears Two households
(fades)
(medium shot of family at table eating, talking about the enemy)
Bryony: Bet the _______ don’t eat as a family (trying to act smart)
Dad: (stands up and bash his fists on the table) I dont give a damn about what that family does!
Caption Sworn enemies
(Aaron sitting at table doing his work quietly upset)
(mother stood at the camera, looking worried)
Mother: why the sadface
Aaron: it doesnt matter
Mother: You have been bullied again! I’m sick of that family!
Caption but what happens when
Scene fades
(Aaron walking towards a group of girls, they begin to push him around calling him names)
Caption when fate plays against them
Zooming in to an alarm clock
(close up of characters getting up and looking confused, turn there heads and scream)
Explode transition
Caption being eachother
Below is the new scene on the story board. 
New script
Romeo Vs Juliet script
Scene 1
(Simple longshot of two houses in split screen, possibly with a blue and pink tint to distinguish between the two)
(fades)
Caption appears Two households
(fades)
(medium shot of family at table eating, talking about the enemy)
Bryony: Bet the _______ don’t eat as a family (trying to act smart)
Dad: (stands up and bash his fists on the table) I dont give a damn about what that family does!
Caption Sworn enemies
(Aaron sitting at table doing his work quietly upset)
(mother stood at the camera, looking worried)
Mother: why the sadface
Aaron: it doesnt matter
Mother: You have been bullied again! I’m sick of that family!
Caption but what happens when
Scene fades
(Aaron walking towards a group of girls, they begin to push him around calling him names)
Caption when fate plays against them
Zooming in to an alarm clock
(close up of characters getting up and looking confused, turn there heads and scream)
Explode transition
Caption being eachother
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