Change of plans

I decided to change the opening scene to make it more interesting, this involved having to re-storyboard my ideas and editing the script but overall the new improvement is shorter and gets straight to the point expressing the hate the families have for eachother this is represented visually but with captions too.

Below is the new scene on the story board.

New storyboard on Prezi

New script


Romeo Vs Juliet script

Scene 1

(Simple longshot of two houses in split screen, possibly with a blue and pink tint to distinguish between the two)

(fades)

Caption appears Two households

(fades)

(medium shot of family at table eating, talking about the enemy)

Bryony: Bet the _______ don’t eat as a family (trying to act smart)

Dad: (stands up and bash his fists on the table) I dont give a damn about what that family does!

Caption Sworn enemies

(Aaron sitting at table doing his work quietly upset)

(mother stood at the camera, looking worried)

Mother: why the sadface

Aaron: it doesnt matter

Mother: You have been bullied again! I’m sick of that family!

Caption but what happens when

Scene fades

(Aaron walking towards a group of girls, they begin to push him around calling him names)

Caption when fate plays against them

Zooming in to an alarm clock

(close up of characters getting up and looking confused, turn there heads and scream)

Explode transition

Caption being eachother